True

babeboichan

Commoner
How true it is that,
if we are cheerful and contented,
all nature smiles,
the air seems more balmy,
the sky clearer,
the earth has a brighter green...
the flowers are more fragrant...
and the sun, moon, and stars
all appear more beautiful,
and seem to rejoice with us.
 
have you read mine? i need input from a fellow poet

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like the Fabric,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Break,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die
 
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babeboichan

Commoner
have you read mine? i need input from a fellow poet

Two of a Kind,
Intertwined, Like the Fabric,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Break,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die

it good but if u change da fabric to sumthing dan it might sound much better
 
it good but if u change da fabric to sumthing dan it might sound much better

I changed it. :D

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like the Fabric,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Break,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die
 

babeboichan

Commoner
I changed it. :D

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like the
grapevine
,
Of Space and Time,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never
part
,
The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never
falter

lol i dunno if diz sound any better
 
lol i dunno if diz sound any better
I like it "grapevine" sounds good, let's see

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like Grapes on a Vine,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Be Sold

The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die
Heaven and Earth,
Mountains and Rivers,
Love is warm like the Sun,
A Blanket for Your Shivers,

lolz
 

babeboichan

Commoner
I like it "grapevine" sounds good, let's see

Two Kinds, Intertwined,
Like Grapes on a Vine,
The Bliss and Sorrow,
Of a Lover's Quarrel,
The Joys and Tears,
Two Souls can Share,
The Bond that Holds,
Will Never Be Sold

The Tides will Shift,
When the Moon Arrives,
But True Love Never Die
Heaven and Earth,
Mountains and Rivers,
Love is warm like the Sun,
A Blanket for Your Shivers,

lolz
lol it was good but wen u added diz
Heaven and Earth,
Mountains and Rivers,
Love is warm like the Sun,
A Blanket for Your Shivers,
it juz went off lol
 
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